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Hey invisible Cactus, if it's alright could I possisbly dm you on discord to ask a few questions about the Ai used and etc, purely out of respect and positivity. Not to pressure you thanks for what you made!

Let me know and I can drop my discord quick then delete it so it's not online in the open! :D

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For sure, msg your discord :)

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what a cliff hanger! can't wait for the next update!

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I dont want this to feel like I'm insulting your skills or anything, but I dislike that our choices aren't actually taken into consideration. For example, I didn't want to drink from Daisy, but no matter what I chose, I had to. I didn't want to get a bj from Hazel, but I didn't have a choice. I didn't want to peak on Lily, but again, no matter what I chose, I still did. And the only romance options that you've shown so far are female, there are only two males shown in the game so far, and those are the barkeep, and a scammer. 

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Hi, thanks for the feedback. At the end of the day, the game is an NSFW visual novel. Although I can make it so NSFW content can be declined, with such a linear story I would get boxed in and have to consider way too many variables (did they get a BJ from Hazel or not, did they do this or not). I understand your frustration, but the game is a linear story with optional pathways that give you some differences with ultimately the same outcome. I may include a button to skip NSFW scenes (SFW mode) so you don’t have to see the ones you don’t want, although the character says it happens.


Regarding the male romance options, there are thousands of gay Furry VNs on Itch, which is why my main focus (as well as someone who is not gay) was female romances. However, content is planned for gay romances with some characters (Femboy and Trans), although not a ton. 


Again, sorry to hear your frustrations, and I hope something like a SFW mode might encourage you to play more in the future :)

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18+ content aside, you've created a game with a great story and beautifully crafted art, from the color scheme to the characters' personalities. The game deserves a GOTY. Also, be proud of yourself; I created an account just to congratulate you on this magnificent project.

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If they make a safe version yes otherwise no.

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when the next update will be released? just curious, i know that game was released 7 days ago, so i guess kinda long to wait

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Sometime next week (an announcement is coming soon with the exact day)

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Putting the adult content aside for a minute, the game actually welcomes you with such a nice melody and a beautiful message from the creator. Absolutely loved it! I finished it in one sitting, and the story flowed quite naturally and wasn't boring to read.


The animal facts seem to add up really well and there seems to be no shortage of diversity. There doesn't seem to be any plot holes either!


All in all, I'm definitely keeping an eye out for future updates, came for the Anthropes but stayed for the story! Amazing job invisible Cactus!

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I appreciate that thank you :)

I wanted a very cozy, almost slice-of-life vibe to the entire game (as you can already probably tell, the problems are very mundane and feel realistic). There are too many porn VNs that try to be an action RPG with deep lore, which can be overwhelming for someone just wanting to relax. I'm glad you thought my game was a breath of fresh air in this regard :)

The next update is slated for sometime next week for non-Patreon supports, so stay tuned!

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I absolutely love this game so far its so sweet and its really relaxing, its not what I expected it to be, its so much better than I could have imagined thank you for your continued development and all of the work you've put in so far

Always respect a game that has a clear vision well executed.

Oh can't wait! Dying to know what happens next. And as you said, the slice of life is exactly what makes this game so refreshing. The fact that you can just choose and play however you want not worrying about what choice takes you where is just blissful!

This is honestly one of the best visual novels I've read in a long time, judging by the current content.

Thank you so much, I appreciate it :)

Is it possible to know an approximate date for the next update?

With the current progress, it will likely be sometime next week (although Patreon supporters will get it ideally by the end of this week).

I understand. Thanks for answering my question. I wish you luck in the game. You have a lot of talent and potential.

I honestly wasn't sure I'd comment on the game, but I felt the need to.  I can say in advance that my English level is quite basic, so I apologize for any typos in this review, as I had to use a translator for some specific words. Starting with the most important thing about the game, I found the story quite entertaining. To be honest, I was expecting another soulless game, one that was hastily written just to get some views or create another ordinary game. But this one has something else going for it. The characters are well-written and the story is interesting, considering I wasn't expecting to find another ordinary game of this style. So, on that note, it's very good.  While there isn't much depth in the dialogue, it serves its purpose, and, as I mentioned before, the story is well-written. It's a very nice touch that it's translated. While not all parts are, the ones that are are well translated, as I've tested it in both languages (Spanish and English) to see the differences.
I haven't found any errors, which is very good because most of these types of games are broken and just another one of the crowd, while this one strives to be different. It's also clear that whoever is making it enjoys it. While the quality isn't the best, it stands out compared to other games on this same platform. Therefore, consider this game a very good option if you want to enjoy something calmer and more leisurely, but without losing quality.
While the story is somewhat short so far, in my opinion, I prefer it to be that way, rather than lose quality by trying to be like the rest. This one doesn't try, and it turned out very well.
A message for the creator is to prioritize quality over quantity, as that's what makes this game stand out from the multitude of other games on this platform.
I'll wait for new updates to continue commenting more on this game, as it has a lot of potential, and I'd like to see how it progresses.

I appreciate all the kind words and feedback :), I will be fixing the missing Spanish dialogue in the next coming update!

Hey, greetings… as you can see I’m new here, and I just came to tell you that it’s a pretty well done project, I still don’t believe that they are characters made with AI :0, it’s incredible… the story is good from the beginning, and its style is very good… I hope you make an effort to be able to finish this project completely, I won’t have the opportunity to donate to you but if it were so I would do it… anyway, it’s a magnificent project

is there a discord for this game that we can join for updates announcements or just general discussion about the game? if so I would love to join it

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Extremely refreshing to play, simple with enjoyable story telling. I'm a sucker for action and fantasy based Vns but this has hit a different level of comfort and I had fun. Good job and thank you.

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Love this. Although I usually hate AI(slop), you can tell the dev actually enjoyed writing the story and didn't just want to throw something together for clicks, and also put effort into some of the scenes/combination of scene and art itself.
The story, the worldbuilding, species-building, and the way that the story can so easily be expanded on make me want even more updates! What I love most is the characters, it gives a sort of homey-feely vibe, while still portraying a fresh experience for the mc, which I like since most games that go somewhere new have the mc as a complete idiot 😂
Anyway, great work on the game Cactus! Look forward to future updates, since this is one of the few VNs I actually read through with consistent enjoyment 🙂

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I appreciate the kind words, thank you so much :)

A lot of people dislike the use of AI, but not everyone is an artist or has the means to afford an artist. I still want to tell the story I want to tell, and AI has provided a means for this. With proper transparency about it + not just using shitty images but actually spending hours fixing mistakes, I think I wouldn't call my game 'slop' (but to each his own).

Thank you for understanding and appreciating all the time and effort put into the game :)

Stay tuned for the next update!

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Ah, sorry, I should've made it more clear. When I used (slop), I was referring to all the games that aren't made by devs who care, and are sloppily put together by just using all kinds of AI with no real story. That's what makes yours even more refreshing! 

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Ah, thank you so much :), yes I put a lot of effort and I am really trying to not make it 'just a porn game', but also have a great story and characters you can care about. 

wait this AI? This all looks amazing and too good to be AI!

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Also, every bit of writing and code is entirely by me (other than translations) :)

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If I get a notification or alarm on my phone the sound turns off

Hi, this seems to be an issue (from what I researched) with Android's themselves and I am unsure if I can fix it on my end with development. So sorry to hear that!

My suggestion would be to just save your game (or quicksave) and reload the game, or to try and keep notifications muted. I hope this helps!

Dude, can you please make Boosty or smth the same? I was gonna take "Oakridge Local", but I'm from Russia. I want to support you.

Thank you so much, yes I'll create one and get back to you soon :)

Thank you for wanting to support!

Hi, I am having trouble getting Boosty to work. I am not 100% sure about what works for Russians, but would creating a SubscribeStar work?

SubscribeStar works, but there may be problems. I think we can try. Even if I fail, it may be convenient for others.

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this game is absolutly GOATED this game is the goat cant wait for the next update  !

Thank you :)

Haven't seen all the content, but it seems like a really chill VN so far. 

I've not seen anything major typo-wise, though there was a few oddities.

Personally, I think that third wall narrator/tutorial break was in a horrid spot. The way I see it, we've just got immersed in the player character and suddenly we're being told what we've already read (if we downloaded the game from Itch) and are then told a massive amount of information about the navigation system, which doesn't even begin to branch out until I assume much later in the game? The most relevant information is that there's no "bad" choices, since you have several with cow lady, but really it just feels like bad placement to me. To me it feels it should be right at the begining before Marcus's introduction, or if kept at it's current place then at least make it a "Would you like a summery/tutorial?" pop-up.

When Marcus says "Chatter coming from the city" just before he meet cow lady, 'city' should probably be 'center of town' or simply just 'town'.

"I was just driving to claim a house" feels kinda odd with earlier text talking about public transit, and later Marcus further doubles down on taking transit to get to Oakridge.

The rabbit girl sprites during the river scene feel like they need to be scaled down a bit. She looks like a giant with the perspective of the background.

I see the topic of Futa/Femboy characters got brought up by someone, so I'll give a quick opinion. Personally, I do not care at all for futa, but if you do decide to add it my advice would be:

1. Make the character have player-picked genitalia, so no one gets left out of that character

2. Make them a species that feels more natural being futa (Spotted Hyena is the easiest pick, but Lizard/Snake would fit as well.)

Femboy is a lot less of a problem narrative and gameplay-wise than futa I feel. Like, it feels more natural to just have a simple "thanks, but I do not swing that way" option compared with having to explain why a character is a futa.

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Hello, thank you so much for all the feedback! Wow, this is super comprehensive, thank you. Regarding typos/continuity errors, I actually went back and fixed every single one (along with many other typos). When you’re a solo dev writing thousands of lines of code + dialogue, it’s easy to skim over mistakes but thank you so much for catching some 🙏


Regarding the pop up, I put it before the branching pathways because I wanted to let people know that “Hey, although you have three options of what to do next, you will be able to come back and do all of them” rather than having the player worried they will miss out. However, I do agree it may have been a tad repetitive of the original tutorial message, and I will work on making it sound clearer.


Regarding Futa and Femboys, this will likely be optional side content. I will include a Femboy character where you can choose (like you said) to just simply decline the sexual aspects. However, Futa will be a side quest that is entirely optional most likely. 


Again, thank you for all the feedback! I appreciate the constructive criticism rather than just shitting on the mistakes of an indie dev :), I hope you stick around to play future updates.

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were happy that you really listen to this good kind of criticism.

pls dont stop updating the game, we might not support you in financial way we gonna spread your game to everyone who love furry game 

when is next the update coming out ?

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Exelente juego, tiene una historia excelente y un ambientación y diseños👌

Tengo algunas preguntas

¿Habrá más contenido para la historia?

¿Vamos a movernos libremente en todo el pueblo?

¿Habrá trabajos para ganar dinero (bellotas)?

¿Se comen entre ellos xd?

El único error que encontré que en la traducción en español no se traducen varios diálogos, un ejemplo cuando estamos en el bar y conocemos a la chica zorro, (espero que no se algo importante para la historia).

En resumen:

Muchas gracias por tus comentarios, significa mucho para mí :). Sí, habrá mucho más contenido para la historia en el que estoy trabajando actualmente. Lamento saber sobre las traducciones faltantes, lo corregiré de inmediato. Y no, no se comen entre ellos, esto se explicó durante la escena en el bar (la cual desafortunadamente no tenía traducción).

En el futuro podría permitir movimiento libre, pero por ahora quiero mantener la historia lineal con formas opcionales de abordar las cosas. Sí, podrás hacer trabajos para ganar bellotas en el futuro.

Gracias por tu apoyo (escribí esta respuesta con IA, así que disculpa cualquier error).

Is there a communication place like discord?

cactus said that they're gonna make a discord sooner or later

I see, thank you

I will launch one alongside the next update :)

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Great game. Cheer me up during a rough day, though I'm curious about the user name.

Hey, I am glad it cheered you up and I hope you're doing better :)

When I was a kid visiting family in Arizona, I ran into a small cactus and didn't notice until I saw my leg bleeding later at home. I kept saying 'I didn't see the cactus!' so my parents started joking I got hit by an invisible cactus. I loved playing as the Cactus in Plants vs Zombies Garden Warfare (miss that game), so I changed my username to Invisible Cactus and it stuck ever since.

It might of been a teleporting Cactus actually. Certain types of cholla cactus can jump on to you from static electricity attracting it. Sick user Name though, as a Arizonan I can vouch for the thought invisible cactus being terrifying.  Keep up the good work, looking forward to see what's next.

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Probé este juego ayer y quede asombrado con su historia, ambiente y arte espero sigas asi con este trabajo de gran potencial, estoy ansioso de que llegue pronto la siguiente actualización y poder continuar esta asombrosa historia y fue un gran detalle que estuviera traducido al español al menos de mi parte lo aprecio.  

Muchas gracias, me alegra mucho saber que disfrutaste el juego. Tu apoyo significa mucho para mí y me motiva a seguir trabajando en el proyecto. ¡Espero que disfrutes las próximas actualizaciones!

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also do are you planning to add a price for this game in the future or only prices to certain features/characters, or both?

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Hey, this game will likely remain free forever, but Patreon supporters will get access to new content much earlier + can give input on how to develop the game (characters, fetishes, etc.).

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Could you please tell me if there are any plans to add Chinese to the game in the future? If so, I'm really looking forward to it.

Yes, currently Chinese + Russian will be coming with the next version of the game, with more languages coming in the future :)

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Thank you very much. You have truly crafted an excellent work.ヾ(^▽^*)))

also make a discord if u dont have one 

Yes, I am planning on launching a Discord alongside the next update :)

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Maybe once the whole main story is done, you can keep interacting with different characters, like more dates, saucy stuff or just doing whatever, maybe an adventuring minigame with the fox (i forgot her name), or daily living stuff, an optional "survival" mode, in which i mean a hunger bar, cleanliness, etc. to keep people engaged. i mean fr tho, thats what good game-makers aim to do, increase engagement. 

For sure! At the moment, I would like to make a more linear game with minor branching paths (like what was seen in the current version) since I want to it to feel like a story as well as a game. However, I will try and incorporate more 'minigame' stuff in the future once the main story has developed enough.

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I have some questions. 

1. Will there be any new characters in the next update ? For example, a wolf or cat.

2. Will there be any new scenes with existing female entros added?

I just went through the current version of the game.

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1. Yes, I will consistently try to introduce new characters 

2. Yes, there will continue to be new scenes with existing characters 

Okay, I'll be waiting for the scene with Amber + you can add a 69 pose with her. 

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Absolutely perfect. Bro needs to hurry up on the next chapters

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It’s been 4 days 😭, but yes I am hard at work on the next update (which I will hopefully get done sometime next week). Stay tuned and thank you :)

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Omgosh, Thank you!! I can't wait, keep up the good work

Is there a Discord?

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cant wait for the next update, keep up the amazing work

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any chance for futa content?

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they said their thinking about femboys or FUTA or both

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epic 

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Good game  but if on last conversation we had choices to lend the story to harem(I used harem word because we literally said we wanted to see other fruits too to lilly)  or monogamy it would be much better.

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Just finished playing the game and it was great can't wait for the next update

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Good start hopefully you add pregnancy and some animated scenes

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The best game i have ever played! Thank you for this idea of a mystery world! Wish those places were in real life :). Good luck in future updates!

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Great game, cute characters and more importantly good writing I hope this game takes the route of choosing to date one person exclusively. it would be unique and a good addition

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Hey, thank you so much for the kind words, it means a lot :)

Currently I plan on having a variety of characters the player can have sex with (as we have already seen), but in terms of the more cute, romantic, dating sort of stuff it will be focused on your relationship with Lily.

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Hell yeah good shit 

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Incredible game, I love how it develops and I also appreciate that Spanish tradition. It really is an incredible job.

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it :)

Есть ли русский язык в игре?

Печеньку создателю

Русский язык пока не поддерживается, но будет добавлен в следующем обновлении :)

ждем

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I was really happy when I saw it was version 1.1.0, I thought it was a finished game, but it's an early version. Which is not something bad at all, just confusing.

Anyway, the game is great. The art is lovely, and the sounds effects are appreciated. Sadly, there are not animated scenes. The writing is good, pretty consistent dialogs from the characters, although a bit repetitive sometimes.

Definitively a game with potential to keep track of.

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Thank you so much for the kind words, it means a lot! This is the first version of the game, so a LOT of content is planned for the future :)

Thank you for the feedback regarding repetitive dialogue, this is something I will 100% be trying to minimize in the future. As a writer, I tend to ramble/keep adding details, which is something I am actively working on (and hopefully wont be an issue with the upcoming content).

Hope you stick around for future updates!

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Will there be a harem too IC

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Depends on what you consider by harem. If you mean fucking around with multiple girls at once (not being tied down), then yes. And there will eventually be some threesome content, too.

Okay thanks 

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